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Touching 


It's touching, and strange, to follow a reader through stats. You click here, here, and here; and I've touched you there, there, and there. A mutual path across a body we share. What we know, we have touched; what we feel, we must guess or infer.

"What are you thinking," she asked me while I was sucking her nipples, amazed at their puffiness. The answer, then, was, I'm not thinking anything, except what to do next. Should I go for the panties? Although, a moment ago, I'd wondered if her nipples were hurting her, they were so big. But I couldn't say that.

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"What are you thinking"...I have been asked them many, many times by many partners. Is it the way my face looks, or just my eyes? Am I that far away? Are they so deep they start getting lost in them? I truly am thinking of nothing, nothing but the moment, the senses I am experiencing. Just that...

By Blogger Trish, at July 04, 2004 11:28 AM  

Were you following me through your stats? I was stumbling along, trying to find a place where your writing didn't feel like a scalpel. I'm still looking.

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By Anonymous Anonymous, at July 05, 2004 11:54 AM  

Well, the stats don't enable me to follow anyone personally. And at this point, since I don't have many readers, it's easy to see a single reader click from story to story.

Can you elaborate on the "scalpel" metaphor?

By Blogger John Psmyth, at July 05, 2004 11:57 AM  

Scalpel, you.....the surgical cut. Deft and sure. Close to the bone. Too close to the nerve for comfort.

Me.....unable to breathe.

That's your writing. What else do you write?

DTG xxoo

By Anonymous Anonymous, at July 05, 2004 1:58 PM  

I am trying for "deft and sure" as you say - "Omit needless words" (Strunk) - but I'm not trying to slash anyone open, or choke them, though of course the reader may experience or project effects I'm not trying for, which would be a failure of self-awareness or modulation on my part, no doubt.

What I am trying for is rhythm. It would be nice to try reading these little pieces aloud, in some venue.

These stories are the only stories I write and this is the only place that I write them. It will be interesting to see how (if) they evolve. This kind of writing is not so easy to do.

Thanks for commmenting. What does "DTG" mean?

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