The small of her back: the loadbearing points where I'd put the heels of my hands, mounting her:
Her baby T riding up, giving me her tattoos.
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>> posted by John Psmyth
• 9/16/2004 07:41:00 PM
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2 Comments:
Syllable count is wrong. But, yes, I'm trying to leave more and more out, in the hopes of getting more and more in. Sometimes.
i liked it.
and yes..it was a bit haiku.