Viewing the local antiquities

The small of her back: 
the loadbearing points where I'd put the heels of my hands, mounting her:

Her baby T riding up, giving me her tattoos.



This is like haiku.

DTG xxpp

By Blogger DTG, at September 19, 2004 10:39 AM  

I meant to say, this is like haiku.
Sorry if this double-posts.

DTG xxoo

By Blogger DTG, at September 19, 2004 10:40 AM  

Syllable count is wrong. But, yes, I'm trying to leave more and more out, in the hopes of getting more and more in. Sometimes.

By Blogger John Psmyth, at September 19, 2004 11:02 AM  

i liked it.
and yes..it was a bit haiku.

By Blogger SN, at October 01, 2004 11:03 AM  

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